I’m ready to rewrite it, but I don’t see the article excerpt yet. Please paste the HTML snippet you want edited.

I’ll edit only the visible content (text inside tags like

,

,

,

, etc.) and keep all HTML tags exactly as they are. I won’t touch non-visible attributes such as alt text, aria-labels, metadata, or scripts.

To tailor the rewrite, tell me:
– desired tone (engaging, punchy, conversational, authoritative, etc.)
– target audience
– preferred length or word count
– any key messages or keywords to include
– any content you want emphasized or de-emphasized

Paste the HTML excerpt when you’re ready, and I’ll produce a more engaging version while preserving the structure